
Young Tom crept out by the moons first glow.
To Old Man Johnson's house,
In order to peep upon his spouse.
For Old Man Johnson was a rich old coot,
Who married a stripper wearing thigh high boots.
At the windows edge he climbed a stump.
And what he saw there made his heart go thump.
Mrs. Johnson was using the can.
Pissing straight up just like a man.
When she turned around his heart grew sick.
She had great big boobs but a great big dick.
From his throat came a wee shrill squeel,
And off he bounded down the hill.
At the bottom tired and winded,
He made a vow, 'No more peeping until my life has ended.'
Now Old Tom sits, nose to the screen lost in a dream
Surfing fetish sites with sticky keys from masturbation cream.
What once was his horror, has become his fix.
As he is lost to the cyberworld of Chicks with Dicks.
**************
A reader gave me a message that my ending did not live up to the high standard of a happy man in a sick world. I gave great credence to his opinion and decided that he was right. I should not have ended the story with his being sickened by the twisted side of life but rather he should be embracing it.
I appreciate the input and hope you like the new paragraph.
22 comments:
hoohoohehee.... Very spry!
:o
Great, Fuzz. Just the image I want in my head all day. Damn you!
-- david
Good poem...........bad image!
Now I feel even MORE sick. Thanks a lot. Ugh.
granny: Thanks :)
starbender: I had to delve deep for this one.
david: Painting pictures with poetry. Glad to see it worked.
mike: At least it was half good. ;)
phoenix: Sorry to hear you are sick from more than a mental image.
I love this shit, Fuzz! Does that make me as sick as you? Oh, God, NO!!!! lmao Missed ya!
paige: Things that make you go hmmm.
green eyes: Don't worry be happy! I missed you as well. Nice to see you back.
Variety IS the spice of life...
good golly fuzz, what do call a woman with boobs and a dick?
you had me at "Young Tom" haha
keep em cummin
you should publish a book with all the talent you have
Fuzz your just a reglar' ole poet!!!! lol. One of these days I know I am going to be in a bookstore and see a poster for an up coming book review.....Poetry By Fuzz. And I will say..I knew him before he hit the big time! lol
Gives the old phrase, 'careful what you wish for,' a whole new meaning. Once again Fuzz, you have proved yourself to be the unique-est of poets.
WC
ozy: Now that's some spicy meataballs.
old fart's wife: Chicks with Dicks is my favorite term for it.
ol' lady: Aww, shucks!!!
catch: Aww, flattery will get you everywhere.
wc: Thank you, I appreciate it.
I have to agree that the last paragraph does give this poem a more complete ending.
OK, but really? It just plain MADE ME LAUGH!!
seems to be a fitting ending....considering that we are all sitting here glued to our computer screens ;)
That was great!!
I'm too busy laughing to comment intelligently! You are the KING!
Ewwwww.
tnxx for the smiles Fuzzy I need em right now.
Keshi.
andie: Glad I could make you smile. :)
laurie: Twisted is my forte.
ol' lady: When I realized that it all clicked.
angel, jr: Thanks!!!
green eyes: Aww shucks. Now I am blushing. ;)
paige: It's always better the second time around.
vic: :)
keshi: Thanks, glad I could help in a small way.
mimi: It is just writing skill. ;)
That pic looks like a kinkfest
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